there was no one stronger or smarter
no one I admired more, loved more
when I was very young
but this is 1978
I’m living in Madison, Wisconsin
and my dad has surprised me with a visit
he’s on his way to Louisiana
to check out fishing boats he might buy
for his big tuna business back in Hawai’i
he’s staying overnight with me
in my cramped little studio
which means I’ll be lying on the floor
we’ve come home late
he and I having had a few
so we’re feeling good
he and my mom bought me
a $1200 Martin guitar in 1976
which would be $5400 in today’s currency
he’s never seen it
so I take it out
and he handles it carefully
“Can you play something for me?”
the very young me, not completely gone
leaps at the request, the opportunity to show him
now our relationship has grown different, ambiguous
“Sure.”
I do a quick tuning check
thinking about what I should play
I know so many songs by now
it’s got to be Gordon Lightfoot, though
my hero, a man whose work I worship
a voice I would kill to have
I decide on “The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald”
Lightfoot’s tribute to the crew of that sinking disaster
who were all lost in Lake Huron, enveloped by a sudden storm
when I finish my dad nods, smiles
and tells me I sound good, the guitar too
then rolls over on my bed and sleeps
I put my guitar away
my reason for being
my baby, my love
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Revised 06.14.23
Lake Huron Roll, Superior Sings
I’m living in Madison, Wisconsin,
and my dad surprises me with a visit.
He’s on his way to Louisiana to find a boat
for his tuna business back home in Hawai’i.
He’ll be staying overnight in my tiny studio
which means I’ll be sleeping on the floor.
We’ve come home late, he and I
having had a few so we’re feeling good.
During my first semester at UW, my folks
okay’d me buying a Martin guitar for my birthday.
He’s never seen it, so I take it out, pass it over,
and watch him handle it and strum a little.
“Can you play something for me?”
I know many songs by now and have to think
what I should play that he might enjoy most.
It’s got to be a Gordon Lightfoot piece, my hero,
a man I worship, with a voice for which I’d kill.
I decide on “The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald,”
Lightfoot’s tribute to a ship and crew lost in Lake Huron.
When I finish my dad nods, tells me I sound good,
then rolls over on my bed and falls fast asleep.
In the dark, listening to him snore, I think about
all the music I might have shared if we’d had more time.

The Edmund Fitzgerald is a very good song.
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